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Rise of the Extraordinary Avengers - Coreline 3

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Mari starts out with plans to work with the Champions to stop the Joker R gang once again. Only to find out that those plans already thwarted...
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Okay, I'm not quite finished with this yet, but I have to say, Mari's become ridiculous. I thought you were pushing it when you revealed that she'd learned powerful magic in the last story, but now you've just gone completely over the top with her. Not only did she take down three powerful, trained, experienced supers at once, but she's wiser and smarter than an experienced leader of another super team, too? What's she gonna do next, beat the Hulk at arm wrestling while defeating the Leader at chess? I don't like to be harsh, but frankly I was hoping she'd lose that sparring match fairly decisively, even though I suspected she wouldn't, and I wanted to grind my teeth when I turned out to be right.