SOE: Vengeful Devil 2

And it becomes clear that Asuka's own viciousness and ruthlessness are as of nothing when compared to that of her demon-powered form! Please, read and review! And check out my other stories while you're at it!

Now, I've had some people comment on how, in a way, Asuka's Superwomen story is similar to Rei's in that she receives a gift, and is instructed in how to use it. However, as you've seen here, that's where the similarity ends. Lilith is giving Rei the opportunity to choose, while Zarathos really isn't giving Asuka any choice in what happens to her. Also, there is the difference in how they handle the gifts.

Ultimately, it has to do with them being polar opposites, which is one of the reasons I chose Ghost Rider for Asuka; Rei got her powers from an Angel, and Asuka's are from a demon. It certainly works in my opinion.

Now, as for why Asuka is so much different from other Ghost Riders...that's something that will be explained later. Let's just say that I have some surprises in store for the Red Devil...and a lot of them won't be pleasant.

While working on the overhaul, I decided that Asuka embraced what she had become as a good deal much too quickly. In fact, I think I did a lot of things too quickly, and in the process, opened up a heck of a lot of plotholes in the process. Hopefully, with the overhaul, I am not only correcting the problems I have in writing Asuka, but also correcting all the problems that were so prevalent in the previous version.