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Star Trek Singers by OrionPax09 Star Trek Singers by OrionPax09
A contest entry for :iconsexyvoluptuousvixens: new contest, this one featuring sexy women in space. So I decided to bring together an Orion, an Andorian, and a Romulan to give some musical entertainment on the moon.

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Orion: Victoria 5V4 Shape for GenesisGenesis Evolution: Body MorphsMarja HairClub Dress

Andorion: Stephanie 5Andorian AntennaeGenesis Evolution: Body MorphsPure Hair CrazySexy Silky For Genesis

Romulan: Victoria 5Stephanie 5Genesis Creature Creator HeadsAldora HairMorphing Fantasy Dress for Genesis3 in 1 Skinny Outfit

Background: Last ResortMoonscapesMadman's Mad Universe DrydockTMP Enterprise for poserDAZ Dimension Lights 1Predatron Essential Lights & Skies

Postwork done in Photoshop Elements 7.

Star Trek © Paramount
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Models and poses are good, what you need to work on is the lighting, that is what makes or breaks a 3D Render. In the case of the above picture think stage lighting, each of the girls would have their own spot light on them at an angle to make them stand out. The lunar landscape would have a sun with no soft shadows due to lack of air, might have been cool to show a sharp day/night shadow line. Girls need back lit so they stand out from the background more. Maybe have a smokey glass in the windows, here they look empty. Staging wise the lead singer should be forward of the back up singers so I would have pulled back a bit on the camera and moved the Andorian forward a bit. Maybe turn the Andorian slightly front on face views aren't very flattering in models and RL. This is one of the realistic vs artistic things, people don't have perfect symmetry like 3D models (unless you fix that) so flat on viewing can get you in the uncanny valley. Okay think I nit picked enough.

I really like the clothing choices, gives each their own personality, poses are fluid and look like this was a snapped photo of motion.
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:iconneilv:
NeilV Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice work
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OrionPax09 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
Thank you very much.
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:iconkaizer617:
Kaizer617 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful!
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:iconorionpax09:
OrionPax09 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
Glad you enjoyed this piece. It took longer than I had expected.
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Kaizer617 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You did a wonderful job on the girls! Star Trek forever!
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:iconnescaro:
Nescaro Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
Nicely done.
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:iconorionpax09:
OrionPax09 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
Thanks. Though I admit to having had a rough time setting up the lights and everything.
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:iconnescaro:
Nescaro Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
No problem. Yeah that kind of stuff can be a pain looks like ya managed well though. 
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Knight3000 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sweet!
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:iconorionpax09:
OrionPax09 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
Thanks. I know I have trouble with lighting and posing at times, but overall, I think this came off fairly well.
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Knight3000 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes its very lovely
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